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Maud and Elfleda
Submitted by Devin on Tue, 02/05/2008 - 21:47.
Judging from the comments many people seemed to dislike and hate these two misunderstood women.
But how do some of you feel now, 15 years after Elfleda's and 9 years after Maud's death?
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I think I never liked Maud,
Submitted by François on Tue, 02/05/2008 - 22:26.I think I never liked Maud, but maybe Elfleda could have change though she was having a very bad influence on poor Egelric and maybe he will have ended drunk like Sigefrith had been. And I love Egelric too much to allow him to suffer so I'm not so sad she is no more. As for Maud, she had the same effect on Sigefrith but she was more crazy than Elfleda. I won't say I'm happy they died because who knows ? They might have changed with a good influence or with someone like father Aelfden (who's hard but beloved)...
I'm not sure about Maud,
Submitted by stacysaurus on Wed, 02/06/2008 - 01:06.I'm not sure about Maud, because although I felt she was very immature sometimes, I felt very sorry for her. And a lot of her viciousness seems like it came from her immaturity or craziness. I definitely felt bad for her, but I think if she continued living then it would only cause Sigefrith more pain. If she didn't go mad though, then I don't know.
I never liked Elfleda but we never really got to see her before she became all bitter. So I only have negative feelings for her
I don't think Elfleda ever
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 02/06/2008 - 05:49.I don't think Elfleda ever was likable, though she was not always as bitter as when we knew her. That was after the death of her first baby, and her growing idea that it was Egelric's fault somehow, at least for bringing her into the valley against her mother's advice, if not for an actual curse. Elfleda was rather proud and stand-offish, so I'm not sure she would ever have gained a great many fans. But if I had had more time with her, I might at least have earned a few pitying reactions with her such as I got with Hilda at the end.
Maud was a little different. She was very childish at times, but unlike Elfleda she did not choose her husband, and even once she started to love him, she did not want to be a queen and did not want him to be a king. She had no control over her life at all. If she had been allowed to fall in love with a good, simple gentleman, and go off to a quiet, woodsy place and have lots of babies, she would have been very happy, I think. Perhaps she would not have gone mad so soon or so utterly.
However, I do not think Malcolm was the right man for her, either. He was just the only sort of man who would dare aim so high as a married queen.
I think Egelric would have been good with Elfleda if they hadn't started out in the valley on the wrong foot. Her pride would have been eased if she had been allowed to become a knight's lady. And Egelric at forty was confident and strong enough a man to have stood up to her if she got shrewish. Of course, we'll never know what sort of man Egelric would have been at forty if she had lived... perhaps nasty and bitter as she was.
I had always beleived that
Submitted by Devin on Wed, 02/06/2008 - 13:14.I had always beleived that if Elfleda was a knight's wife and living in a castle she might have been alot happier.
While I hated their actions,
Submitted by Cearbhaill on Wed, 02/06/2008 - 18:15.While I hated their actions, I found both characters quite fascinating (that sentiment applies for other characters as well). It is so outside of my character to be as openly cruel as Elfleda could be that I found her to be particularly interesting. Sending Egelric out to get boots just to have him get mocked and mistreated... Quite ballsy. I also did have some pity for her at the end of her life as it has become my natural feeling toward anyone who believes suicide is the answer.
Maud often reminded me of children I've taught. The fact that she had little control over the way her life went did help her case. And you know, Malcolm just has that je ne sais quoi... it'd take a strong woman to walk away from him!
What I love most about Maud
Submitted by Devin on Thu, 02/07/2008 - 16:55.What I love most about Maud and Elfleda is that they had character and were complex. Characters like Eadie are so boring and forgettable.
I think Eadie is a complex
Submitted by Lothere on Thu, 02/07/2008 - 17:30.I think Eadie is a complex character, too... so worried about being a "great lady" that she often fails to be... trying so hard to live up to what she thinks Sigefrith wants her to be that she often isn't... And her worries about religion and about Sigefrith's blasphemies, and her worries about not getting pregnant, and the stress she suffered when she lost her daughter...
She is like a female version of her big brother -- a somewhat inferior version of her parents, and conscious of her inferiority. Except, unlike Sigefrith, she's a lot more anxious about it. Sigefrith just shrugs and carries on being his slightly dull but wonderfully big-hearted self. Eadie is a little neurotic. And she is totally blind to the many faults of her ill-behaved children. (Young Sigefrith can be too, though Haakon generally does get a spanking in the end.)
And then there is her complex relationship with her father, with her mother, with Leila, with her half-siblings...
I do not find Eadie boring and forgettable. She is one of my more well-developed characters, in fact. She is just less spectacularly, cinematically tragic, and more like people we all know in real life.
Okay, maybe I shouldn't have
Submitted by Devin on Thu, 02/07/2008 - 19:03.Okay, maybe I shouldn't have said that she was forgettable, but for me IMO Eadie has no spunk. Its great to see women who are head strong and have a mind of their own like Matilda. Eadie is so obediant and willing to please everyone that I feel sorry for her.
And there are alot of people who are tragic in real life; we're just lucky that we're not one of them.
Nice to see you mention
Submitted by Lothere on Thu, 02/07/2008 - 19:29.Nice to see you mention Matilda in there! She certainly had spunk, and she wasn't "wicked" like Elfleda. Well, she was no better than Maud in the end, I guess, since she had an affair too. But somehow it was different with Matilda...
Anyway, as it happens, we will see poor Eadie trying to show some spunk in a few "days". I'm afraid she's going to learn spunk doesn't pay, though.
I also think we shouldn't
Submitted by Rowena on Mon, 02/11/2008 - 07:09.I also think we shouldn't forgt the period we are speaking about. These people haven't heard about feminsm yet and in medieval times women weren't expected to be strong... or at least not stronget than their husbands.
Though I think we are maybe early enough, because this trend became stronger with time IMO. Vikings for example were quite famous for their women having many rights.
Although both women were
Submitted by Lisa on Tue, 02/12/2008 - 10:24.Although both women were tragic, I just can't bring myself to like either one. Maybe because I sympathize more with their husbands because they were mistreated and (in Elgeric's case) abused.
Elfleda did cause Egelric
Submitted by Devin on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 12:00.Elfleda did cause Egelric alot of pain, I'll let you guys on a little secret I was relieved when Elfleda died. Of course shocked and saddened by her untimely death but she was causing so much pain for Egelric and Iylaine. I had hoped that Egelric would find someone to love and respect him, he found Lady Sela and Lili.
I was also somewhat relieved when Lili died, but I was sad to.
What did poor Lili do that
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 12:05.What did poor Lili do that you should be relieved she was dead? She wasn't causing anyone any harm, was she? Poor Lili... poor Egelric... they were so cute together.
I was wondering that too.
Submitted by Cassie on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 12:31.I was wondering that too. Good gracious! I miss Lili...she was such a cutie.
Its not like that Lothere,
Submitted by Devin on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 12:53.Its not like that Lothere, you hinted on Mhalwae that someone in Lothere who was pregnant might die. This was after Lathir's death, so I was thinking who was pregnant at the time; there was Hetty but she was in the early stages of her pregnancy, then there was Matilda and Lili. I had this feeling that Lili was the one, but I was trying to shrug it off.
The post before we found out that Lili passed, I asked you how she was doing and I think you said that we'll find out in the next post. I was relieved to finally have the answer that "she infact did die." I wasn't relieved to see her die I just wanted to know if this hunch that I had was really true and it was. The only character that I will be happy to se go is Lar, but not Lili I was genuinely sad that she did die.
That makes more sense,
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 13:08.That makes more sense, Devin. I don't remember that comment on Mhalwae but it's quite possible I said it. Poor Lili... but I guess if I had to choose between the two, I would rather Lili died than Hetty. Somehow Lili always felt a bit like a supporting role, but Hetty seems like one of the main characters. Or maybe it's just because Important Stuff is happening to her right now. But I do like having her as a Duchess.
You weren't an eeny weeny
Submitted by Verity on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 13:36.You weren't an eeny weeny bit happy that Bastien and his green robe were put to rest too Devin?
Thinking back I can't think of a single character that I have been happy they died. Hmmm... actually I guess I was kind of happy that Hilda died but only because I wanted Young Sigefrith to be happy and there was no way he could with her alive. But I still felt sad when she died and if there was another way to make Young Sigefrith happy without her dying then I would have preferred that. But also I think the deaths are an interesting part of the story so I guess I am "happy" they happen in that respect, though sad. If that makes any sense at all.
I felt dreadfully sorry for both Maud and Elfeda. I didn't really like Elfeda ever as a person although I liked her as a characters. I don't really think it is her fault she ended up the way she did. So much sadness. There were a couple of times we got a glimpse at the real her but we never got to see her that much before she was terribly unhappy. I can't forgive her for the way she treated Egelric but I can begin to understand. Things would have been so different if she had found a way to share her sadness with Egelric so they could support each other rather than taking it all out on him.
Maud on the other hand is a character I really liked. She was a wonderful woman in her own special way and having a husband like Sigefrith just squashed that. I really think he only ever saw her as a pretty face when she was so much more. One of my favourite storylines was the Malcom and Maud one... I feel like with Malcom we got to see how Maud could have been if she had been allowed to choose her own man. Poor Maud, I sympathise so much with her, forced to marry a man who only wanted her at first sight for her looks and then in a position she didn't want to be in as Queen. And Sigefrith with his dreadful opinion of women, in a strange way Malcom respected her more than Sigefrith ever did... or at least he understood her more. Maud could be so petty and childish but if I put myself in her position I don't know if I would be able to make the best of it. I know so many people hated her for what she did to Sigefrith but I really think he didn't do a whole lot for her. He tried but it just wasn't the right life for her. That's why I didn't think she was terrible for having an affair with Malcom. He offered her something Sigefrith never could have.
One thing I always found interesting was that both Sigefrith and Malcom made always prefixed her name with some other m word... melancholy Maud, mad Maud, magnifecent Maud. She really was all of these things and more.
Still one of my favorite
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 13:48.Still one of my favorite comments. I even included it as a quote up top. Every time I read it, it makes me think of the wicked witch was it? in the Wizard of Oz, or her alter ego in Kansas. "I hate Sebastien... and his green robe too!"
As time has passed I've grown to like Maud a lot more and Sigefrith... well, I won't say I like him less, since I love him as a character, even though I am glad I didn't marry such a man. But it's true... he tried to love her in his way, but it wasn't her way. I even put the thought into Britamund's head in "Britamund raises a martyr's prayer":
We have perhaps had a little more evidence of the truth of that recently, but since you aren't caught up yet, Verity, I won't go into detail.
Oh, and did I do the M____ Maud thing with Malcolm, too? I don't remember. I often made a point of it with Sigefrith, though. It was the closest to poetry the poor man ever came. Silly Sigefrith...
I was happy when Lothere
Submitted by Devin on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 13:53.I was happy when Lothere put away that hideous robe, hopefully she deleated it.
Maybe someone should create a fashions of Lothere thread.
Let's say he was buried in
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 02/13/2008 - 13:57.Let's say he was buried in it, Devin. I still have other colors of the robe though. As it happens the Abbot of Thorhold has a bright orange version. But it suits him... and feel free to hate him when he makes an appearance, which he will fairly soon...
I've always liked poor
Submitted by Alice on Wed, 02/27/2008 - 21:12.I've always liked poor Elfleda, mainly because I felt so sorry for her. It seemed like to me that Gunnilda was trying to take her place in the family, and for that reason I never really liked Gunnilda.
I definitely didn't like Maud because her behaviour was always childish and selfish. The one act that really got me to dislike her was when Matilda went up to her castle to reconcile with her, and Maud threw it in her face by laughing at Alred's illness. Sure, she didn't choose who she got to marry, but I think there has to be something inherently evil in a person for them to act like that.
I tend not to think of that
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 02/27/2008 - 21:27.I tend not to think of that chapter when Maud was so cruel to Matilda. It's true, that was awful of her, especially since poor Matilda was there to try and make up with her. I don't know if she was inherently evil but she was inherently petty and spiteful. And definitely selfish.
Quite interesting to see someone who doesn't love Gunnilda though. I don't believe Gunnilda ever intentionally tried to take over Elfleda's role, but Egelric asked her to take on a lot of it, directly or indirectly -- and both in terms of wifehood and motherhood.
In particular, on the night Elfleda killed herself, she went to pick up Iylaine at Gunnilda's, and I think she was quite upset Egelric had taken her there. Egelric at least was rather nervous about it as soon as he learned.
It's funny, though, Elfleda never really did anything against Gunnilda, did she? Gunnilda was the closest thing to a friend she had.
I think Elfleda realized
Submitted by Alice on Wed, 02/27/2008 - 21:43.I think Elfleda realized what was happening, especially when Iylaine started calling Gunnilda Mama. So really, she had a point when she exclaimed that Finn was the only one who loved her.
I guess Maud's not inherently evil, per se, but she does lack empathy for others. She was too immature to understand how deeply her words wounded Matilda. Maybe she was thinking, "Well, are you here to flaunt the fact that my husband's not back and yours is? Well, he might to be here for long anyway! Nyah nyah nyah." That scene bugged me much more than her affair with Malcolm did.
It's true...that is one of
Submitted by Cassie on Thu, 02/28/2008 - 09:49.It's true...that is one of the scenes I always think of when I think of Maud's badness. I can forgive her for a lot of things. I understand, especially in my rereading, that she never loved her husband really, that she was truly unhappy, that she was forced into a marriage, that she was too young to marry anyway, and that she should never have been a queen. And I know that she did really love Malcolm, and that she was really mad at the end. And that Sigefrith never understood her. I love Sigefrith, especially as a king, but I would never ever ever want to be his wife, or his daughter, so I feel for Maud on that one.
But to me, what she said to Matilda that day was possibly the most unforgivable of all the things she did or said. That was just horrible, no way around it.
I never liked Elfleda. She
Submitted by Karen on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 10:42.I never liked Elfleda. She was too cruel to Egelric and to Iylaine. I was pretty content when she killed herself. I have to argue in Gunnilda's favor, though: she wasn't trying to takeover Elfleda's role, but she stepped in to be helpful. And even if Gunnie was Elfleda's only friend, you can't quite say that Elfleda never did anything to her. Remember that she was trying to trick poor Alwy into impregnating her since she blamed Egelric for giving her weak babies that she couldn't carry full-term.
Maud, on the other hand, I liked for the most part. She drove me nuts (ha ha) when she was cruel to Matilda and Siegfrith and others; I hated that she cheated on him; and I disliked her selfishness. I felt sorry for her for so many reasons, though, that I was able to overlook those things. Once she went crazy, it was time for her to die so that Eadie could get Seigfrith.
I know that Eadie isn't terribly spunky, but I just think of how adorable she was when she was a sweet teenager in love with a king and still able to withhold innocent kissing from him. I think that took some work on her part!
I have never much blamed
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 10:57.I have never much blamed Elfleda for that attempt to "seduce" Alwy. She seemed very not-right in the head at the time. Likewise when she "kidnapped" Wynna and was trying to convince Egelric that she was their baby.
Mentally she simmered down quite a bit when she got Iylaine, though she got weird again towards the end, when she seemed to think she didn't need Iylaine any more because she had her own baby, and because Iylaine was getting attached to Gunnilda.
I don't think it took as much effort for Eadie to resist Sigefrith as you seem to imagine. She really was so innocent that she thought kissing was already quite a shocking thing. And Sigefrith never pressured her, except to tease. He liked her innocent, even if that does make him a little creepy in retrospect.
Are you kidding me? I don't
Submitted by Karen on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 11:23.Are you kidding me? I don't find it creepy after Maud. I'm sure he liked knowing that his wife was too innocent to cheat on him. And perhaps he thought she'd be too timid to deny him after their marriage, unlike Maud.
And, wow, I forgot about her kidnapping Wynna. Man, Elfleda was pretty nuts, too.
I do think Sigefrith has a
Submitted by Cassie on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 11:26.I do think Sigefrith has a wee bit of a borderline pedophile vibe. A thirty-six year old guy falling for a fourteen-year-old girl? That's a bit, well, ooky.
It will only be creepy if he
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 11:29.It will only be creepy if he stops finding her attractive when she gets a little older and goes after some other innocent little thirteen-year-old.
However, Sigefrith has always been very good about sticking to his wedding vows, except for those unchaperoned but chaste visits to Eadie's bedroom. And Eadie is the last woman to cheat on her husband, so perhaps they will go on contentedly together until Sigefrith is simply too old to be interested in ladies of any age.
Or until he dies. I still have the feeling Sigefrith will be the next to go out of the first batch of men.
Oh dear, that is an unhappy
Submitted by Cassie on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 11:35.Oh dear, that is an unhappy thought. Though I admit I'd rather see him go than Egelric or Alred. I feel like those are the ones we've seen the most of, understood the most, gotten so deep inside their heads...
I still can't believe Cenwulf is dead. We didn't see much of him in recent years, but still. One of the originals! We've lost 2 of our original men, and all but one of our original women.
I somewhat regret killing
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 13:05.I somewhat regret killing Cenwulf. He deserved more time in the spotlight, not death. I think I am going to have to do something interesting with that crusty old Baroness, now, to make his death worthwhile. Or perhaps with Edris, or poor little Baldwin. My feeling is that the future is not looking too bright for Baldwin though.
I hadn't realized I had killed all the original ladies but one. Women did have a lower life expectancy than men but still. However, I think Gunnilda is the type who will live to 85 and be the wise old matriarch. She may end up being the last one left alive of the original crew, unless childbirth claims her before her time.