"I have learned that man can live by bread alone, for at least a month."
A Question to all Storywriter's
Submitted by Leiela on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 01:47.
I don't know about you guy's, but i think lothere said it once and i agree.
I see my blog not as a Typical "story" but more as following charecter's though their lives.
Now with this said i've seen the possibilty for "trouble on the horizon" certainly in my blog anyhoo (though with Lotheres 2 years to get though december she might not run into this issue for about another 50 years haha )
My blog started Typical RKC style, a couple of noble familys, a royal family and some peasants/merchants and in the begining i followed all of thier story's however as the generation's went on i found i couldn't follow them all an longer because 2 parents may have had 5 children, those 5 children had 5 children etc etc i mean i currently have 209 sims which are active decendent's of those founding sims and following them all would be frankly insane!
Of these 209, 120 have actually appeared in some significant fashion within the story and of those maybe 100 or so are still alive right now.
So i do have a point honest
How many Charecter's/storylines do you think readers are able to follow without getting confused?
I tend to try and do my storylines in jumps so we might spend a few months reading about 2-3 storylines then i put those to bed for a while while i move to another family/storyline the idea being nothing especially interesting is happening in the other family's lives right now and we'll go back to them when it "perks up"
I've been looking though my "plots" and charecters a fair bit lately and of the charecters who have been dorment for a while, im trying to decide if i should leave them that way or bring them back to life but im concerned about giving the readers too many things to follow and confusing them.
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Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 05:13.There is such a thing as "a story about a place" -- for instance I think the LotR books qualify -- but making a place a "character" in your story takes extra skill. (I think Verity pulls it off with her Mhalwae story -- the island is always "there.")
On a much smaller scale, Sherwood Anderson's Winesburg, Ohio is a great example of telling stories about lots of people to weave together the story of a place and a time.
So I'm not saying that "big epic stories with lots of characters" or "small stories with lots of characters" are wrong or can't/shouldn't be done.
But I would discourage people looking for a story idea to take on an RKC. A medieval story is fine, but the very structure of an RKC sets you up with a high number of characters to start, plus an exponential growth in the number of characters over time. You have to be phenomenally gifted at character-building to pull that off if you play by the rules.
Now, those of us who already have a story like this underway are stuck, of course.
I can't prescribe the number of characters that people can keep straight. It depends a lot on your skill at making each character memorable. I have 436 characters who have made an appearance in my story, with half of those appearing in only one or two chapters (so, essentially bit parts). I have 104 characters who have appeared in 11 or more chapters, and only 30 who have appeared in more than 50 chapters. (Out of about 1700 chapters.) (You can see the top 40 characters here.)
Out of those I frankly wouldn't expect my less-than-adoring fans to remember any more than the top 30 without some reminders. And people who are just starting (some people can't tell Alred from Sigefrith at the beginning!) or coming back after a few months of not-reading, even less.
So what I'm trying to say is: focus. If you think people won't be able to keep track of more characters, they probably won't. They probably already can't keep track of the characters you do have. (I am speaking as much to myself as to you here ) If you're really interested in telling an engaging story, rather than playing the RKC, reduce your number of characters as small as possible, and focus your energy on developing those characters.
I'm guessing that my readers don't come back because they want to know what is happening in the Kingdom of Lothere -- they want to know what is happening in the lives of Egelric and Alred and Gwynn and Vash and everyone. The more you try to spread that interest out over many characters, the less interest anyone will have in any particular character, and I would guess that translates to less interest in the story overall.
Does anyone here watch good old-fashioned weekday afternoon soap operas? I think it's a good point of comparison for this kind of storytelling, and not just for the OMG DRAMA STEAK! factor. I wonder what is the average size of the cast of characters in a soap opera? They've had 60 years to perfect the art form and figure out just how many characters an audience can be made to care about and come back for every day.
some people can't tell
Submitted by Leiela on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 07:52.Hmmm... I think the human
Submitted by Van on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:06.Hmmm... I think the human brain does have the capacity to follow quite a few stories at once. Thinking about sim stories with a large cast of characters--Lothere, Mhalwae, Dragging Blue Lake, etc.--there are quite a few going on as we speak. Looking at my own outline for this "year", I had two major storylines and three posts that were a continuation of pre-established background storylines. Looking at my outline for next "year", most of the posts are mainly of the same sort as those three posts, so a whole thwack of storylines will be briefly followed-up. Bare in mind, however, that unlike Lothere, Mhalwae, etc., I usually only have about one post per "month" (I probably shouldn't space them out that much... but I want to see the kids grow up, dammit!)
But I think as long as they all tie in somehow, through character and geographical relations, people are capable of following more simultaneous storylines than any author particularly wants to write.
Interesting point about the characters. I think we all have a few characters that just sit in the background that we'd really like to make something of, but for some reason, they just can't get a moment in the spotlight. After a while, the tendency is to go back to the same characters. I don't know why that is--maybe it's psychological, like a subconscious decision or just the thought that readers might not react so well to too many characters or whatnot. Looking at my own list for my larger story, 113 characters have made at least one appearance; however, only thirty-four of them have had a post from their POV, and only four of them have appeared in more than twenty posts (out of 137 posts). Looking at Lothere's stats, and thinking back on other people's stories, that does seem to become something of a trend at some point--the other characters are there if you need them, but for the most part, the drama stays focused with a select group.
But yes, it's definitely the characters who make the story. Well, aside from the author, of course, who quite literally makes the story... but the characters make it what it is, after the author makes the characters. But yeah, I'm going to have to second that: try to keep the focus on the characters who have emerged as your strongest for the most part. Not that I ever follow that advice myself, but seeing as I'm an individual of questionable sanity, I'm allowed to contradict myself
Lothere, you are missing an 'r'. Mmmm, drama steak sounds yummy!
Interesting point about the
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:23.Or maybe it's just our writerly selves silently acknowledging the fact that too many characters and too many plots just isn't as engaging?
This could be true even for us, who write the stories: we tend to write storylines and chapters according to what characters are intriguing us in the moment. We almost have to -- I only have something approaching writer's block when I am writing a chapter because I know I "have to" (like the last chapter with Kraaia) rather than because I want to. I used to literally force myself to intersperse chapters about one storyline with chapters from another... to the point that we got December 1085 with a dozen storylines in full swing.
(I here highly resolve that this shall not happen again.)
Where the hell am I missing an R, Van? *goes crazy* It's like Where's Waldo in here. Tiffany, help me find my error!
I already told you about the
Submitted by Van on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:29.I already told you about the 'r'. You meant to say "drama streak", but it says "drama steak". I wouldn't have noticed it if it hadn't made another real word, I'm sure
Yeah, I see what you mean when certain storylines almost feel like an obligation. Like, I had one recently where I pretty much wrote myself into a corner and ended up hastily resolving it and moving on... but *ahem* we shall no longer speak of that. But yeah, I think such things are probably just the result of trying to force oneself to use all the characters at their disposal. I think if I could do my RKC story over again, I would have established that sort of focus from the start--like, just follow the king around or whatever, and see whoever he happens to interact with.
Hmmm having a quick look
Submitted by Leiela on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:38.Hmmm having a quick look down my "made an appearance list" it seems i have 100 charecters who have appeared (good lord how did i manage that)
37 of those where "bit parts" who i never intended to become fully fledged charecters ie i have one girl who's appeared as the midwife for a few births never to be seen at any other time
or where main characters but are now dead.
Leaving me with Argh! 63 charecters left ..
8 of which are currently bit parts or new charecters i want to expand on.
20 have appeared in more than 20 posts.
12 have appeared in more than 50 posts.
The rest i guess are bit parts. .. (23 charecters)
So maybe not as many as i thought overall ... still not sure if it's just too many for people to get a real connection... i dunno maybe it's fine as is as long as i don't add in too many new ones.
Ah so! No, that was really
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:39.Ah so! No, that was really supposed to be DRAMA STEAK. I think we can blame Devin for originating the term.
I don't feel that I force myself to use all the characters at my disposal. (On the contrary, I currently have to keep slapping my hand as I reach for Diarmait and Sadb.) The Kraaia chapter (and most if not all of the other "have to write" chapters) came about either because I need to "park" someone for a while, or because I need to set up something that will cause an important story event to happen in the future. (Such as the Aelfden losing his book / Myrddin taking his book to the abbot chapters.)
In my case, what seems to happen is I put characters aside, and then people start begging, "But what happened to Bertie and Anna?" or whoever. I can't keep up with everyone, seriously!
Oh i totally get the writing
Submitted by Leiela on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:45.Oh i totally get the writing yourself into a corner problem... im soooo in the middle of one of those at the moment.
I sware there is one particular storyline that seemed like such a good idea at the time but now (12 months later) im totally kicking myself for having such a dumb idea... don't get me wrong the story it's self was fine but the consequences of it are biting me on the ass big time.
Bertie's a perfect example
Submitted by Leiela on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 06:52.Bertie's a perfect example of what im saying he was such a colourful feature as a child in the Gunnie/Eldric storylines even though i guess he was there at the time to represent gunnie's children and her motherhood rather than ever being especially integral to the plot.
That now he's grown we all want to know what happened to the little scamp
Thats kinda how i feel with quite a few of my "children" some where added as "background and theme" more than charecters as the plots where often about thier parent's but now they've reached adult and moved on people still ask what happened to so and so.. argh.
There is nothing left of my
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 07:12.There is nothing left of my story BUT consequences biting me on the ass.
I always expected Bertie to play a bigger role than he has lately. He actually was supposed to be a MAIN character. He may have big adventures still before him, however. As Dunstan gets older and takes on a bigger role, we will probably see more of him. (After Dunstan goes home to Dunellen that is. )
But other kids... like Edris's younger kids, or Brede's kids, or Baldwin's and Britmar's kids.... I just don't have any use for them yet and don't know if I ever will. I'm OK with that though.
I have a few charecter's
Submitted by Leiela on Fri, 10/16/2009 - 07:55.I have a few charecter's like that, one's i ment to play a much bigger role than they have so far and keep meaning to "pull out" ... i keep telling myself "when this storylines over" but it never seem's to happen.
Ah, I didn't get to find the
Submitted by Tiffany on Sat, 10/17/2009 - 07:29.Ah, I didn't get to find the error!
Vash has only had 15
Submitted by Tiffany on Sat, 10/17/2009 - 07:30.Vash has only had 15 POVs???
How can this be!?!
I reckon it was because I
Submitted by Lothere on Sat, 10/17/2009 - 07:35.I reckon it was because I hid so much about the elves in the beginning. If I had done more Vash POV chapters, we would have learned far more about the elves than I wanted you to know at that time. (And the trend continues somewhat, to be honest.)
That is just wrong! Vash
Submitted by Tiffany on Sat, 10/17/2009 - 07:38.That is just wrong!
Vash needs more air time. See! You're biased!
Yeah! Give us some more Emo
Submitted by maruutsu on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 19:54.Yeah! Give us some more Emo Peter Pan!
I think an RKC can be a
Submitted by Chicklet on Thu, 01/13/2011 - 14:00.I think an RKC can be a great place to begin a story.
What I chose to do is begin by writing about the royal family. Then as they encounter other characters I write about it if I get story worthy pictures.
I play all the lots in 1 round and end them about the same sim time as the King's family. I only bother taking pictures for the story if one of the previously written about characters lives on the lot or visits. Then afterward if I don't see the pictures as story worthy, I scrap the pics.
So, sims who have been in the story only get the spotlight if something interesting goes on with them. Potentially I may not come back to a character.
I have had couples who have died leaving no heirs who never made the story.
So why bother? I like the idea that the writer knows the stories of everyone in their kingdom regardless of if it was worth writing about. When a character in the story talks about another character, I already know about that character, I'm not dreaming them up on the spot. When I write about a character meeting someone new, I am familiar with that character already. It's easier to write about characters when you know them better. It's easier to write about their histories when you have already played them out. (It's much harder to write the histories of the first sims.) Not that I always write about their histories, but isn't it natural that at least some of the characters may talk about their childhoods, or dead family members?
I also have the delight of more than one kingdom. Remember how exciting it was to read about characters from Scottland or elsewhere coming to Lothere? Or how it is to look forward to those mysterious elves? How about finally getting to see where they live? I have those things ready at a moments notice. I don't have to sit and think about it, or stop to create it, because it already exists.
As for how to handle the characters in your story... If you have comments enabled for your story, or polls available, use them. If you're lucky your readers will tell you. Also consider writing more about the characters that are more fun to write. It's quite possible they're more fun to read.
As for the characters kids that seem like a loose thread if you don't write about them... They could come in handy later. Perhaps those kids or they're decendents will marry into the family you are currently writing about, or be friends or enemies, etc. You can always refer back. Like a character could think about how they hadn't seen them in a long time, or their grandparents had been friends, or even that they have been friends since they were wee babes. It can be understood that they have hung out but you haven't written about every time they played tag. You can even show them in the background in pics, but have the story itself centered on different characters.
There is something great about having a large amount of characters that are being played out and choosing interesting bits to write about. It also makes it very easy to switch focus to other characters if the first few are having a lull.
Good ideas! And this, in
Submitted by Lothere on Thu, 01/13/2011 - 14:17.Good ideas! And this, in particular:
is excellent advice!