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Characterization Woes
Submitted by Van on Thu, 11/05/2009 - 20:26.
Okay, so I'm about a thousand words short of today's NaNoWriMo quota (even though it's eight freaking thirty), and my main character is just not cooperating with me. He's in an interrogation room, and I'm asking him the simplest of questions, and he won't give me any answers. I'm shining a flashlight in his eyes, and nothing's there.
I've been writing for what, given the rather lackluster quality of my work, is a rather shamefully long time, and never have I ever encountered a problem with this. Normally, my characters are very open with me--the minute I start writing them, I know who they are. There are a few of them whose life stories I can blurt out without hesitation, without even ever having to consider them before. But this guy? So far, he's just a bunch of soulless words.
So... has anyone else here ever had this problem before? If so, how did you go about solving it?
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Submitted by maruutsu on Thu, 11/05/2009 - 20:56.While we wait for Lothere to turn up here and give us some of her usual words of wisdom, I can tell you that you're not the only one with that problem. I've had it too, and I've found the only effective way of resolving it is by writing. Just put your character in a difficult situation, and ask him what he'll do. Force him to make a difficult choice. Think about what you have of him so far, and come up with a story to back that up. Ask yourself what you need of this character in terms of plot, what use he'll be, who he'll be interacting with, etcetera.
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Submitted by Lothere on Thu, 11/05/2009 - 21:07.I have had similar experiences, but it tends to be when I am trying to make a character do something he just doesn't want to do. When a character goes dark like that, I step back and think hard about what I'm asking of him: is it right for the story or not? The characters often know best.
Now, if this is a brand-new character (which it sounds like, since you don't know his backstory or anything) maybe the problem is that there really is no character there. You are telling yourself that you need this character to fill a certain role (I do hope he's not the protagonist) but perhaps you don't -- or perhaps you need someone totally different to play that story role. Try switching the gender. Or try telling the scene from a totally different POV and get someone else's perspective on what's going on AND their thoughts on that character. Or try writing a different scene from later in the story that involves that character. Maybe it's just that scene that's wrong, not the character.
Maruutsu's advice to put him in a difficult situation is a good one. A person's character really comes out in a moment of conflict. So if you have a scene planned for that character in distress, maybe you can write that scene first.
This is NaNo, so it's not really the time to take a few days doing a character bio or some free-writing about that character. But on the bright side, it's NaNo, so it's OK if your characters are a little catatonic at times.