"Sometimes I wish you were an ordinary girl."
Ending A Chapter

Submitted by PenelopetheFox on Fri, 01/27/2012 - 11:09.
It seems like a stupid question, but I've found that it isn't always obvious-- How do you know where to end a chapter? With a lengthy (or in the case of this story, LENGTHY) piece of work, the action doesn't always resolve within the space of one chapter, so where to cut the cord? The goal would seem to be an image or an action that feels like a giant period or end dash for the chapter as a whole. How do you know when you've reached that point?
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Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 01/27/2012 - 17:44.It's usually one of two things: either I've just shocked you or otherwise dumped a cliffhanger on you; or the central conflict of the chapter has just been resolved. (For bonus points, its resolution introduces a still bigger conflict, or at least poses more story questions.)
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Even the cliffhanger chapters usually have some conflict going on up till you get to the very end, and the cliffhangery thing makes the original conflict moot or silly. For instance, Dunstan and Alred squabbling over telling Malcolm the truth about Lasrua, until Father Matthew says, "Um, guys? I married them last night." So the conflict still gets resolved. It just leads to a massively bigger conflict.
Thanks, Jenny! That was
Submitted by PenelopetheFox on Sat, 01/28/2012 - 06:42.Thanks, Jenny! That was actually really helpful. I have difficulty thinking about the units of a story as microcosms of their own as much as they are parts of a whole, knowwhatImean? I should be more consciously aware of isolating what the character wants and what is keeping them from it within the space of the chapter.