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Submitted by Van on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 00:56.
Okay, so here's a hypothetical situation that probably won't ever happen in your story, but I'm curious.
Say there's some noble girl, and she's engaged to some noble guy. However, said noble girl gets involved with a married man and gets pregnant. So, she's been unfaithful to her fiance, so he probably wouldn't want to marry her anymore (and his parents would probably agree), but at the same time, she can't go running to the father of her baby, since he already has a wife. Or maybe her mortified parents would make her get married right away so that she can at least pretend the baby is the noble guy's baby?
I had a better question too, but I've totally forgotten it. It probably had something to do with Lar.
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Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 05:23.Don't TELL me you're depriving me of a chance to talk about Lar!! Auuuggghhhh!
This exact event happened in the backstory of my story so I can answer it easily. (And it TOTALLY could happen in my story... what if Emma hooked up with some married man, say? DRAMA!)
Wynflaed & Mouse's Little Mother was the illegitimate daughter of a married lord and a noble girl. Egelric told her story in "Malcolm gives his advice":
He doesn't actually say that the girl was betrothed at the time, but in her family and at her age (15/16) it was quite likely.
The important thing to the girl's family is avoiding scandal -- and if they possibly can, save the intended marriage, but that depends entirely on the family of the young man she was supposed to marry. They can either refuse her or, as you said, rush the marriage and pretend the baby was the husband's. But unless they have such a great stake in the marriage going through, I don't see why they would. Especially if she had a boy -- the man's "heir" would not even be their grandchild!
Would Alred still have wanted Brit for Dunstan if she had actually gone all the way with Brinstan and been pregnant? I am not sure about that. More likely Alred would have campaigned for her marriage to Brinstan, but failing that, I don't think he would have married her to Dunstan. Dunstan would have been devastated, for one thing. He's not the most pragmatic sort. At the most they might have organized something where Brit would have gone off to have her baby in secret and given it up "for adoption" prior to the marriage.
However, if (hypothetically speaking) Emma had an affair with a married man, I could imagine her marriage to Baldwin going ahead. Baldwin is such a pushover, and Edris is not really the sort to put her foot down either. (Cenwulf on the other hand...)
I am not sure Sigefrith would want it, though, now that I think about it. He's definitely a pragmatic sort but women have always been his Achilles heel, and he got burned once by Brit already. I can see him packing Emmie up to a convent immediately and never speaking to her again.
Did that answer your question?
Yep, thanks And I
Submitted by Van on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 07:15.Yep, thanks
And I remembered the Lar question! Unfortunately, it's not the most interesting one out there
I took a look at the dates on his family tree and noticed that Lar and his half sister Risha (which, I'm guessing, is the one he was close to, considering she's Lar's only sibling on Nidala's side) were both born on December 24. Their mother died on December 24, which must have really sucked for both of them. Dru was born on March 22, which was also the date of Nidala's marriage. March 22 also fits as a possible conception date for both Lar and Risha (in Lar's case, did Dru just decide to go rape/sleep with Nidala as a birthday present to himself?) Just wondering about the significance of these dates, because they don't seem coincidental to me, even though they might be.
EDIT: December 24 could have also been the day Nidala was conceived, I just noticed now.
Birth and conception dates
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 07:26.Birth and conception dates among the elves are not particularly significant, since the ladies are only fertile around the equinox and solstice times, and their gestational period is equal to 3/4 of a year, so the babies are born around equinoxes and solstices as well.
As a result, the idea of a "birthday" is not something the elves put much store in, since approximately 1/4 of the elves have a birthday around the same time as yours. They celebrate the solstices & equinoxes, but not the people who were born on those days. We saw this with Hila and Kia who didn't really understand the concept of a "birthday" when Wulf and Gils apparently tried to explain to them, and they thought it was something called a "bird day".
The only significant birthday is 16. That is when the kisór boys are old enough to be counted as adults, and to marry and fight. It tends to be the age at which khírrón girls are considered old enough to marry, as well, though some don't marry till later and some do before. That was the age at which Iylaine was supposed to marry Vash, though, and Rua was supposed to marry Lor.
Being born in the fall or winter is considered somewhat inauspicious though. It's best to be born in the spring.
Obviously, however, they can die on any day of the year. Nidala's death wasn't accidental, so from there it is possible to speculate that the date wasn't coincidental.
I for some reason believe
Submitted by Devin on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 15:22.I for some reason believe that Dru killed Nidala..
That's what I've been
Submitted by Van on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 16:10.That's what I've been thinking lately too.
..As much as I don't want to
Submitted by Twistedchic911 on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 18:46...As much as I don't want to think that... I think that's how it went down... Lar was illigeminate, correct-o? So... Dru offs his Baby-Momma and... really achieves nothing? I can't think today.
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Her life was more than mine;
like a proud shooting-star, into the night.
She crashed through the air with a rip like a knife.
I suppose there would be
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 18:54.I suppose there would be more sense in Dru killing Lar (baby boy) than poor Nidala.
Darnit just when I was thinking I was gonna put off until the spring the stuff with Dru originally scheduled for the end of this month...
Maybe we need a poll.
To the
Submitted by Twistedchic911 on Fri, 12/05/2008 - 21:52.To the poll!
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Her life was more than mine;
like a proud shooting-star, into the night.
She crashed through the air with a rip like a knife.
How does Imin feel about
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 11:13.How does Imin feel about being the oldest living kisor male? Does he consider himself lucky to have lived so long, or does he kind of wish he'd die already so he doesn't live to see the further decay of his culture, and his sons killed and his daughters raped?
That's a very good question,
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 11:39.That's a very good question, especially since Imin is supposed to be the mirror Alred.
The elves don't believe in suicide AT ALL. Obviously the men think it's super-wrong too, but as Vash once pointed out, it does tend to come up often in literature, and it does tend to be glorified when it does. Among the men there is definitely a cult of heroes and heroines feeling so strongly about something (lost love, lost honor, lost friend, lost war, etc.) that they kill themselves over it. That cult does not exist among the elves.
So Imin isn't going to kill himself, that's for certain. Does he wish he would die? I don't think so. For one thing, he's now the oldest living male, but he wasn't until rather recently. The elf Sarim died in January 1084, and he was 90. (Wow, he had seen it all!)
I doubt Imin even really has the sensation that he's "the elder" now... "the elders" have always been so old. In fact Sarim himself was the eldest of the eld since... *calculates* 1067. It's more likely the elves feel like they have no elder now. Imin is only 38.
Imin doesn't feel lucky to have lived so long -- 38 isn't that old, especially for elves -- so much as he feels bitter that all the elves who should have been older than him are dead. So he feels neither relief at having lived so long, nor any great honor.
I'll tell you what I think about Imin... he's actually kind of special since you would think he would be the "die singing" type, and that's probably where he would lead the elves if he were leading. But Imin has given up on the "die singing" for himself. He feels like he has already lost any chance for poetry in his own life, and it's too late for him, but he's going to die fighting, tooth and nail, to try to win that back for his children and grandchildren.
As he said to his daughter:
Imin doesn't want to die until he has seen that day. That's his one last passion, and it's going to animate him for the rest of his life.
Eldest of the Eld. I love
Submitted by Tiffany on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 15:14.Eldest of the Eld. I love that.
I also love these character analysis(es?). They put everything I've ever thought or read together into one coherent stream of thinking. And as much as I get from these, they don't even scratch the surface.
After taking years of structured Literature classes, I've pretty much come to the conclusion that even the most in-depth character is still lacking. Your characters seem so real. Like you could honestly have a candid conversation with them about the weather, and in their signature dialect and gesture, you could hear their response. It's uncanny. You've managed to make me start reading again. I mean really reading.
Okay, I keep telling you how wonderful your writing is and probably making an arse of myself, but you're really great. Really. Make it a book. Or something. So people won't look at me funny when I talk about this cool webstory with Sims in it.
Haha your ulterior motive
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 16:02.Haha your ulterior motive comes out: "Make it a book so I don't feel so silly reading it!" Honey I wish I didn't feel so silly writing it! But like K, "I do it anyway".
Thanks for all your compliments though. *on a compliment high today* I am so super-happy to know that I can make these characters seem as real to you as they do to me. That is like the ultra-compliment to a writer, beyond even "you made me laugh/cry/snort my Dr. Pepper" and beyond even "I couldn't stop reading".
Sometimes I think I shouldn't reveal so much about the characters in this forum or in the comments, like I would be tempted to be lazy in chapter-writing because I had already explored some aspect or other of a character through discussion. Or worse, I would inadvertently leave something out of the chapters, thinking you already knew it, when in fact it had only been revealed in the forum. I must try REALLY HARD not to let that happen. I really want the story to be able to stand alone.
On the other hand, assuming I can pull that off, I'm glad I have these discussions -- especially "off-line" in the forum like this -- because it really helps me with character development to have people posing these tough questions about the characters. It helps me think about things and, especially in writing the responses, clarify my own thoughts.
And considering most of the readers never set foot in the forum, I suppose it's like bonus material for the people who do. I hope you think so anyway! You are all like my writing buddies, helping me work out the story as I go!
P.S. Haha Van we have so hijacked your thread!
That's okay. I knew it was
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 18:54.That's okay. I knew it was only a matter of time before karma came back and bit me in the ass
Besides, it's fun reading forum comments.
Before I forget... Quick
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 19:01.Before I forget...
Quick question about Sigefrith's marriages. If we leave Eadie's fertility struggles and constant worry over them, as well as Maud's last year or so when she wasn't really all there, who would you say Sigefrith is happier with, if this hasn't been answered before? From what I can tell, I'd say he's happier with Eadie, for the most part. They're more compatible, actually knew each other before they got married, and it's a safe bet she loves him more than Maud ever did, but that's just my thoughts on it, and I am usually wrong.
Also, how does Alred feel about Gwynn looking so much like Matilda? Proud? Maybe a little nostalgic?
I would say it has to be
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 19:22.I would say it has to be Eadie. He was just as starry-eyed and giddy with her when he first fell in love with her -- maybe more, since it's always delightful when it's reciprocal -- and now she's comfortable. She fits him just right. Pretty, not too bright, not too independent-minded, and always looking to please him and be a good queen to the best of her abilities. (Which are not too shabby, since all he really wants in a queen is a gracious lady.)
He had his period of love with Maud, both when she was first a mother with Caedwulf and Brit, and later when she had her little starry-eyed, empty-headed interlude of her own, but Sigefrith has never been the sort of guy who would be all tragically romantic over this magnificent girl. He liked to compare her to a deer, but it always confused and frustrated him, too, the way she never truly let him get close to her. Eadie is just so eminently touchable and human and there. Eadie is a lot like her mother in that -- Sigefrith has his Eadie and Leofric has his Eadgith. The difference is that Sigefrith will never have his Hetty.
(Or will he? I suppose I should never say never, but Sigefrith is a bit too pragmatic to risk his honor on a romance. Plus he may not have many years left in which to fall tragically in love anyway.)
As for Alred, we have seen several times how he can get all misty and nostalgic at Gwynn's resemblance to her mother. In "Gwynn sees a smile" for example:
The more interesting question is how does he feel about the personalities his daughters are growing into. Gwynn does not seem to have her mother's sharp wit, for example -- that's Margaret's specialty. My feeling -- and later chapters may prove me wrong -- is that Alred is a bit troubled by Margaret's resemblance to her mother in those ways, because the poetically right thing would be that Gwynn would have gotten 100% of her mother's personality to go along with her looks.
He adores Margaret of course -- Margaret has always been HIS baby -- but he wouldn't have mourned the lack of Matilda in her if she hadn't gotten much. On the contrary, perhaps he would have liked a little female Alred.
Especially now that she's growing up into a curvy, bouncy little image of Matilda, Gwynn is the daughter that Alred is all dreamy over -- the sort of too-good-to-be-true, sacred, untouchable one. I can't imagine Alred planning for Gwynn's eventual marriage the way he already is with Conrad and Meggie. Gwynn's eventual marriage is like OH MY GOD too much romance to bear, whereas Margaret's is more like a wink and a nudge and a keep-your-hands-to-yourself-meanwhile thing.
However, I must add that recent chapters have shown that Gwynn has apparently inherited her mother's interest in sex. This is not only POETICALLY RIGHT but POTENTIALLY HILARIOUS. She may never enter into a belching contest at table, as Matilda used to and Margaret surely does, but she may very well have her foot in somebody's crotch beneath it.
And how is poor Alred going to handle that? "Why can't you be less like your mother???"
I can totally see Gwynn with
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 23:07.I can totally see Gwynn with her foot in Finn's crotch under the table a few years from now while Margaret and Conrad have a belching contest...
Hey, since Britamund is married and pregnant at fifteen, does Gwynn feel any pressure to seriously settle down? I mean, I know she kind of feels bad about herself since so many guys are passionately pursuing her best friend and all she gets is some kid calling her a cockaninny, and I think we all have had some experience with that sort of thing and know how much it sucks, but maybe that's not all that's kind of putting Gwynn down a little?
I shudder to think of what would happen if Gwynn ever met Lar. Normally, I'm all for two of my favorite characters meeting, but somehow I think any interaction Gwynn has with Lar could only lead to disastrous results.
Also, I don't remember, but did Vash tell Iylaine about the khirron's tradition of having only two children? If so, is she planning on having any more with Malcolm or not?
Gwynn has her mothers
Submitted by Sofie on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 03:34.Gwynn has her mothers meddling side as well. Maybe Megs have it too, but Gwynn was such a Matilda in "Gwynn makes a message". Matilda's meddling felt more thought through (she always thought she would make people happy) and less selfish than Gwynn's though. Errm.. I just remembered that when she told Gunnie that Egelric was Cubby's father, that wasn't so selfless at all.. So maybe Gwynn is very much like her mother when it comes to meddling.
Gwynn's meddling side has
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 05:54.Gwynn's meddling side has not escaped my notice, though I forgot to mention it here!
Like her mother, she thought she was doing a good deed by sending the Captain away -- or at least she rationalized it that way in her own hurting little mind. She knows who Connie's true love is, and she knows it ain't the Captain. Plus she feels quite offended that this former grubby little barefoot sailor's son would come courting her very ladylike young friend. (Who is not nearly as ladylike as Gwynn likes to think her, and dress her up as...) Gwynn thinks she is protecting poor shy Connie and helping her get the man she loves.
But clearly -- or at least I hoped it was clear -- there is something rankling the poor girl just a little. She is very generous and kind, and she does want her friends to be happy, but she would like to have just a little romance of her own. And Connie is all tall and slender and green-eyed and wavy-haired, and Gwynn thinks herself so short and chubby and boring-brown... It is not very FAIR.
And that is a very Matilda-based philosophical system.
I don't think Gwynn feels any pressure to get married. That is definitely not on Alred's horizons. We sorta saw that in "Hetty reads the one word":
I really don't know how it's going to play out with Alred as she grows up. Someday he will be obliged to admit that she's seriously in love with a serious man (with a serious NOSE?) and he will have to let her go. But at the moment I have a hard time imagining Alred even looking at the likes of Finn and admitting that this blushing, bony-elbowed creature is of a species that might someday marry his daughter. Even if he's wise enough to know that Gwynn & Finn's insults of each other are a good sign that they secretly like each other, he may be willfully blind enough to miss it in this case.
No, on the contrary, Gwynn is the one who is eager to get married. With an appropriately romantic courtship beforehand, of course, just long enough for her to milk it of all its romantic potential, but definitely with the end of marriage in sight. It's all she thinks about -- for herself, for her friends. Alred is going to be the one pulling back on the reins.
If anything is getting Gwynn down it's her fears for her father. And her troubles about her parents, but in the last chapter she did seem to feel quite chummy with Hetty and found her romantic again, and that's all that really matters in Gwynn's world. So that's somewhat hopeful right there. But I am not sure Gwynn is experienced enough yet to recognize that her parents are sorta faking it, so I wouldn't count on Gwynn being the one to bring Alred and Hetty back together.
Gwynn and Lar. HOLY COW. I hadn't even thought of those two on the same continent together. Wouldn't Gwynn get all dreamy over a romantic rebel freedom fighter type? Of course she would have to turn her back on the dreaminess that is Vash and Co. Plus, all it would take is Vash explaining that the kisór are the elven equivalent of grubby little barefoot sailor's sons, and that would turn her off. Or if that doesn't work, someone explaining that Lar is a rapist, and perhaps also explaining what rape is since she doesn't quite get it.
As for Iylaine... I think she does know the elves only have two children? I can't remember how she learned though. Vash could easily have told her at some point, in some conversation we did not see, if not in one we did. And generally speaking I can imagine Iylaine (at least silently) using this as a reason to "have a headache" or whatever when Malcolm comes lumbering into bed... but at "that time of the year" she would have a hard time refusing I think. More than ever, Iylaine is going to find herself torn between her already very conflicted emotions and the one undeniable demand of her body.
She's still nursing Maud, though, so her hormones are probably skewed way off to the other end of the scale at the moment. Malcolm probably won't find any tigresses in his bed this winter.
Has Alred seen Leia at all
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 16:23.Has Alred seen Leia at all yet? And also, considering she's so young, I'm sure Leia doesn't know exactly what happened with her parents, but does she have any sort of sense that something surrounding her birth was maybe a little unusual?
We need more Leia! Alred has
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 18:08.We need more Leia!
Alred has certainly seen her, at least from afar. His children have all met her and spent time with her. We saw her with Gwynn at Lili's the one time, and they certainly seemed to know each other well enough.
As for Alred I am sure he must avoid her as much as he can. He would be polite with her, of course, but it must kill him to see her. She caused the death of Matilda, and she never ought to have been born.
What does Leia think of all this? She is probably only just getting to the age where she's beginning to understand there's something not quite right about her family situation. She knows Eadgith is not her mother and she knows her real mother is dead, and she knows that Gwynn & Co. are her half-siblings just as Leof's many kids are. Leof already has so many kids by two different women, Leia probably finds that somewhat normal though. At this age, I expect that anything Leia has noticed that makes her different actually makes her more special than other kids. She thinks quite highly of herself!
But I am sure she doesn't understand the whole deal about adultery and so on. And I doubt she knows that her birth was what killed her mother. I don't know who would tell a little kid that. It will probably rattle her a bit when she learns though, especially if she doesn't learn it until she's quite a bit older.
I was reading this one Brede
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 18:13.I was reading this one Brede post not too long ago, I think the one where his youngest daughter was born, and he was disappointed that she wasn't a son. But isn't he stuck with Daeglan as his heir anyway, since he's the oldest?
He is kinda stuck with him,
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 18:41.He is kinda stuck with him, but on the other hand if he proves to be incapable of being a normal functioning adult, then I am sure no one would blame Brede for letting his inheritance go on to his next son. The law isn't so inflexible as to be absurd. The only person really in a position to dispute that would be Daeg himself, and we don't know that he'll be thinking along those lines when he's grown.
However, Brede first needs to have another son...
Wouldn't there be some
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/08/2008 - 18:46.Wouldn't there be some lovely drama if Estrid had a son with K and Brede never figured it out and made him the heir?
Of course, that's probably too similar to the whole Sigefrith/Maud/Malcolm/Cubby plotline... except that Sigefrith had Caedwulf, and he did eventually figure out that Cubby wasn't his son.
I take it Brede isn't thrilled with his family these days? Haven't really seen him since he realized he was acting like his father, as far as I remember.
Hey, how long did Alred and
Submitted by Van on Tue, 12/09/2008 - 21:12.Hey, how long did Alred and Matilda know each other before they got married? How did they even meet? Or was this mentioned and I just forgot it...
I don't have the exact
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 05:53.I don't have the exact details for this and I probably never well, but I'll try to remember all the bits and pieces I've mentioned over the years.
We know Matilda was born in Winchester and mostly grew up there in the court of her uncle and then cousin the Earls of Wessex. Sigefrith's lands were on the fringes of his territory (it was more an alliance than a relationship of liege and subject), so Sigefrith & Co. could have made the occasional visit over the years, but Alred was not part of the Co. at the time.
We know that Leofric met Matilda before Alred ever did, but it was after he was married to Eadgith, so no earlier than November 1058. Matilda would have been 16 or older by the time she met Leof. (And Sigefrith was the same age as Matilda.)
Sigefrith, Leofric, Cenwulf, & Co. participated in Earl Harold's campaigns in Wales in 1062-1063. That's where they met Alred. Alred was from farther in the southeast of Sussex than Hwaelnaess, but Earl Harold was taking over the south of England at that time and his influence must have spread that far.
Of course, at some point during that campaign, presumably towards the end in 1063, Alred "accidentally" saved Harold's life and became a war hero. Sometime soon after -- perhaps after the war was over and the troops marched back to Winchester in glory -- that was when Alred met Matilda. Since wars were mostly fought in the summer, it must have been summer or early autumn 1063 that they met.
And of course they were married on December 12th of the same year, so it was only a few months' courtship -- involving, as we know, Alred making a great fool of himself over her, and Matilda publicly scoffing at him and privately copying his poetry into her psalter, and eventually breaking her vow never more to laugh.
And it ended, as we know, in circumstances that I will probably never make plain (since even I could not create the appropriate level of awesomeness for that), with Alred waking up very hung-over in some other town, in bed with a naked-except-for-her-wedding-ring Matilda, and no clear idea how he came to be there. But very glad he was.
The End.
*sigh!*
Oops I did not see your
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 06:00.Oops I did not see your previous comment about Brede.
Except for the chapter in Whitehand's court with young Caedwulf, I don't think we've seen Brede at all since Daeg killed the cat and Brede flipped out and knocked him down.
Their family life has definitely gone way downhill since then. That wasn't exactly a wake-up call for Brede, it was more like a drink-to-stay-unconscious call. It's gotten bad enough that Eirik felt obliged to take Estrid out for a night on the town without Brede on the occasion of the Old Man's birthday party, and bad enough that Eirik told Murchad he didn't want Sigi and the boys to go live with Brede and Estrid if anything ever happened to him.
It's actually kind of interesting Eirik hasn't put his foot down yet, but maybe he recognizes that Estrid is Brede's wife and there's not really much he can do. But then again, this is Eirik, the sort of man who bends reality to his will if it's not going his way, so I wouldn't rule out future interference from that quarter.
Anyway, I plan on doing a chapter with Brede and Estrid this "weekend" in Lothere time. But the big explosion has to happen first.
"Gwynn and Lar. " I very
Submitted by Devin on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 07:51."Gwynn and Lar. "
I very much doubt that Alred would allow his daughter to marry a rapist and the murderer of his best friend's wife.
Oh certainly not. That's
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 07:54.Oh certainly not. That's why Van mentioned "disastrous results".
Remember this is Gwynn though: her model for the Ultimate Love Story is elopement, whether it was Alred & Matilda or her grandparents Cynewulf & Gwynn.
The poor girl is so
Submitted by Devin on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 07:58.The poor girl is so foolish..
I remember in one of the
Submitted by Van on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 20:39.I remember in one of the posts, I believe it was around the time of the Old Man's worst birthday party ever (it was definitely at a party, if not that one), it was revealed that Alred didn't want Cedric as a suitor for Gwynn because then he'd have mutual grandchildren with Leofric.
Say Magog has a daughter (with Rua?) sometime in the relatively near future, and she and Drage or Stephan or some other future son of Sigefrith and Eadgith (I do hope they have at least one more child before he has to die) end up falling in love. Would Sigefrith, should he live to see that day, have an Alred-like opinion about that, or is he too pragmatic to even consider that?
Also, was Matilda buried in her iconic red dress? If not, will we ever see Gwynn wearing it?
Ooh, I hope we never see
Submitted by Cassie on Wed, 12/10/2008 - 21:07.Ooh, I hope we never see Gwynn in Matilda's dress. That might freak all of us out a little. Alred most of all.
Hmm, I remember she got the ruby headdress and the psalter, but it would be interesting if she got one of those red dresses as well. I know Alred has all of these weird misplaced-Matilda stuff onto Gwynn, but I think he gets a little weirded out when she looks TOO much like Matilda. I know I certainly would be if I saw her all decked out in Matilda finery...
I can't wait to see an all-grown-up-and-horny Gwynn. She and Finn arriving late at parties with their hair all mussed, flushed and giggly...
*Hijacks thread while she should be writing her paper*
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I'm romantic, literary, cynical, and a diehard Alred Sebright groupie.
From "Alred begins to
Submitted by Lothere on Thu, 12/11/2008 - 05:32.From "Alred begins to see":
That chapter was from Alred's POV, so straight from the horse's mouth.
Up until he caught Cedric kissing Kraaia, I believe Alred would have tolerated Cedric if that was what Gwynn truly wanted. He would have told himself that it was unfair to blame the son for his father's sins. But once he saw Cedric reproducing them, that was the end of the road for poor Ceddy. At least until the boys does some massive making-up. It's sad, too, because Cedric now has something of a crush on Gwynn. Not to mention he will never be invited to a nightgown-and-underpants party now!
I doubt Sigefrith would feel the same way about Magog, though. He loves Cubby, after all, and puts up with Malcolm and invites him into his home because of Cubby. So I doubt Sigefrith would raise a stink. It's just not Sigefrith's way.
Sigefrith doesn't feel the same way about Malcolm that Alred does about Leofric anyway. For one thing, Leofric did it again. Or seemed to. If Malcolm started hitting on Eadie Sigefrith might run out of patience with him, but that's about as likely to happen as for Malcolm to start hitting on Sigefrith's furniture.
And anyway, not to say Sigefrith has really forgiven Malcolm, but Maud is dead after all, and Sigefrith has moved on, and he isn't the sort of man to clutter up his life and choke his heart with ancient grudges. Alred, as we have seen on several occasions, is not even beginning to be over Matilda, and his anger at Leof is undying.
Moving right along...
I don't know what Matilda was buried in, though I have asked myself the question. I doubt she was buried in one of her red gowns (she had several, of course ) because she had just given birth, and those gowns weren't really compatible with an enlarged waist. Matilda did not wear much red when she was pregnant. So I see her rather dressed up in something soft and simple and cozy. Ach, poor tiny little wax-white Matilda lying in the bottom of her coffin, dressed up like a doll about to be put away forever. Poor Alred and Dunstan.
Moving right along...
So the red gowns are probably somewhere. I am sure Alred neither gave them away to her maids, nor had them cut up for other uses. It would be more Alred-like to let them rot somewhere.
I have considered making Gwynn wear one of the dresses -- wherever I downloaded the teen version of Maud's/Brit's dress, I also got a teen version of Matilda's. But I doubt it will happen. Alred is definitely the sort of guy who would look at Brit in Maud's dress and wonder how Sigefrith can possibly not find that a little creepy.
If it ever did happen, I suspect it would be some combination of circumstances that would lead it to be Margaret wearing them, actually.
Gwynn, you may have noticed, never wears red. She very often wears green to flatter her father. And at least at the moment she is quite insecure about her curviness and thinks she's simply fat (which Matilda always did too for that matter) so I can't imagine Gwynn strutting around in a sexy red dress.
Margaret, however, wears a lot of royal purple, and whatever the hell else she wants, and she naturally struts, so there's that. I can almost imagine some scene of Scarlett-in-the-Curtains magnitude, in which Margaret saves the day by lacing herself up into one of Matilda's old red dresses. Margaret may never have the curves for it, but give her a few years and Matilda-like she may have the balls to pull it off anyway.
Has Seven ever asked anyone
Submitted by Van on Fri, 12/12/2008 - 16:37.Has Seven ever asked anyone about his human parents? I know he's a little young to be thinking about that sort of thing, but at the same time, he definitely knows he's not an elf...
No, I don't think he has
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 12/12/2008 - 16:46.No, I don't think he has expressed any interest. He knows he is not an elf, of course, and Lar's little heart-to-heart with him may even have made him realize he might one day live with his own kind (if a boy his age thinks that deeply... which a son of Aelfden might), but I don't have the sense that he thinks about his human parents yet.
Anyway, the elven families have been so shattered that it's not unusual for children to be raised without fathers and even without their mothers in many cases, being raised by aunts or cousins who have decided to live underground, while their real mothers still live in the forests. When Lar was a boy he was mocked because he didn't know (or wouldn't say) who his father was, but things have gotten so bad that I doubt the kisór boys of this generation use that sort of ammunition to taunt their peers.
Poor Seven has other problems though, as we will soon see. (Soon, as in on Friday probably... i.e weeks from now )
Is there any chance of Edris
Submitted by Van on Fri, 12/12/2008 - 16:49.Is there any chance of Edris getting married again?
Funny you ask! I had an
Submitted by Lothere on Fri, 12/12/2008 - 16:57.Funny you ask! I had an idea about that, but I may let it drop due to too many other goings-on. Or put it off till later.
She isn't looking for a husband, and at 40 she really has passed the limit of age where a man would marry her with the idea of having a family with her. Someone like an older widower looking for companionship might take an interest in her though.
Edris is not the loveliest woman in Lothere, and she is kind of awkward and shy, and never got over being old-maidish even after she was no longer an old maid. Just the sort of character that would be hilarious trying to fend off a starry-eyed and stubborn suitor who can't take a hint even if it's delivered by way of a churn staff to the side of his head.
But I may let that idea drop, as I said.
Ohh, Edris gets some! Yes!
Submitted by Tiffany on Fri, 12/12/2008 - 18:09.Ohh, Edris gets some! Yes!
Just out of curiosity, do
Submitted by Van on Fri, 12/12/2008 - 23:14.Just out of curiosity, do you have any sex scenes planned for the near future? I'm trying to get better at writing those, so reading some wouldn't hurt
I never thought the day
Submitted by Lothere on Sat, 12/13/2008 - 05:37.I never thought the day would come when someone would look to me as a model for writing about sex. This calls for a !
Well let's see, Estrid is going to go back to pick her necklace up from K, on Friday probably, but I'm not sure I want to go straight back into an all-out sex scene with those two. That could get kinda repetitive.
I have another coming up soon after that but it won't be pretty. I seem to prefer writing about twisted violent sex. (I think it is, paradoxically, easier, since the emotions involved are a lot less complicated.)
And that's all I have until my outline trickles out after Christmas. (Yes, believe it or not, it seriously does. My last written-down chapter is on Dec. 27 and nothing more till early Feb., but if you knew who shows up on Dec. 27 you would know that it's NOT the last chapter of the year. And maybe we will get more sex. Just sayin'. )
I have been thinking about doing a scene with Sigefrith and Eadie. (Nobody better say Ewww to that.) But I was planning on saving it till a quiet period, it isn't urgent. And I kinda wanted to do a few more chapters of Sigefrith upright and clothed first to get us back into a Sigefrith mood.
So I don't know. Do we need a poll? Do we need MOAR SECKS!!? And with whom and whom? *ponders*
I don't really care that there are under-age readers out there... the ones I know about seem a mature bunch. But I know that some people just don't care to read that sort of thing.
Sigefrith and Eadie would be
Submitted by Van on Sat, 12/13/2008 - 13:00.Sigefrith and Eadie would be cute. And I'm still of the opinion they should have another baby, so...
Anyway, what do you imagine the elven accent to sound like?
Do you mean the elven accent
Submitted by Lothere on Sat, 12/13/2008 - 15:50.Do you mean the elven accent when they are speaking English? Or their own language? (Elvish?? Elven?? I never know.)
Generally speaking I have described their speech as being rippling and flowing and various other watery metaphors. In their own language they have a lot of repeated syllables since prefixes/suffixes often get added to multiple words in a sentence according to the context. For example imagine if instead of "the big red dragon" you had to say "the-big the-red the-dragon"... the effect is somewhat jittery or ripply.
"A big red dragon" is "makíl yó khúm" but "I saw a big red dragon" is "Rûín almakíl alyó alkhúm" because the dragon is a direct object, and all the adjectives describing it are inflected in the same way, with al-.
The other thing is that the language's declensions and conjugations are much more vowel-centric than English, and I think this would also lend a somewhat warbly sound to it.
For example with modern English regular verbs you conjugate with consonant-based suffixes at the end -- walk, walked, walking; tap, tapped, tapping -- and it's only the irregular (and usually very old) verbs that you see vowel changes like speak, spoke, spoken, speaking or eat, ate, eaten, eating. In the elven language all conjugation is done around the vowels, so the vowels are pronounced with much greater emphasis and care. (In English any unstressed vowels are usually pronounced with the same dull schwa sound no matter how they're written, which drives French people crazy, believe you me.)
So the end result with all these repeated short syllables like al- and té- and -ím and -rí, which are spoken quickly, and this large palette of vowels which are dwelled on, gives an effect somewhat like bird song -- lots of short trills and warbles with the occasional long note.
And if you throw in a question, which has the rising tonal particle la at the end and optionally scattered through it, you get something even more musical. Here are Gunnilda's thoughts on Finn's accent from "Gunnilda sees the son":
Finn is applying the tonality of the concluding la of an elven question to the last word in an English sentence, since he has nowhere else to put it, and it doesn't "sound" like a question to him unless it has that striking lift at the end. English has a different tonality to question-sentences, too, but as you can see from Gunnilda's impressions, it's not as high as the elven.
In other news, the elves don't have the consonants B or F, which is why Lena (and now everybody) calls Benedict "Penedict" and why the elves call Finn "Vin". They also don't pronounce TH very well at all, but it's damned annoying when I try to write it that way, so I don't.
In exchange though they do have some consonants we don't have in English, including the CH sound of the Scottish "loch", both the Scottish Rrr and the French Rrr, and pretty much the entire range of liquid consonants that the humanoid mouth can produce, most of which I don't even know how to describe to you but which again would contribute a watery sound.
Oh, and the kisór accent is supposedly more guttural, but I haven't figured out the linguistic logistics behind that yet. It may be that it is simply the perception of the khírrón and not based on reality -- or because when the kisór speak to them they have to keep their heads down and basically mumble into their chests.
The kisór also have a habit of repeating entire words to emphasize them, which the khírrón find hopelessly vulgar of course. Like Sela with her "It is sad in the winter, sad, sad" or Lena with her "It is fire, fire for you."
Uh... sorry you asked yet? Drop a quarter in the "linguistics" slot and I can go all night.
Eirik knows about Brede and
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 15:00.Eirik knows about Brede and Estrid's marital troubles, and if I remember correctly, Murchad does too, but do Sigi, Synne, and Selwyn? And has Trudi even met Selwyn's siblings? Also, has Selwyn taken advantage of Trudi's permission to sleep around?
I doubt Synne knows if Sigi
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 15:16.I doubt Synne knows if Sigi doesn't. Murchad probably figures it's not his business, so even if he knows he might not say anything.
Sigi would surely talk about it with Synne if she knew, but I wonder whether Eirik would tell her that kind of thing. In spite of their great love for each other, they don't actually tell each other everything, in a possibly misguided attempt to protect each other. Eirik might like Sigi to go on believing everything's happy back home, since she'll never have the opportunity to know otherwise. I did get the sense that Eirik was keeping that a secret from her and everyone else when he told Murchad that he didn't want Sigi and the boys to go to Brede. Brother Murchad has to help him keep that secret I guess.
Selwyn must know since he lives in the valley, though it's not sure Selwyn would fret about it in the same way Sigi and Synne would. He probably grumbles about his brother being an asshole but doesn't really feel implicated. He hasn't lived in that house in years, and even for his age (16) he's not very mature. He's like Caedwulf without the sense of honor (which Caedwulf may sometimes choose to ignore, but at least he has it). Selwyn isn't a bad guy in the way that Leofwine was, say, but he just naturally falls into the condition of selfish-jerkiness. (So it's not even sure he sees his brother's behavior as all that improper.)
Trudi has only met Brede, since Sigi and Synne both left for good long before she arrived. Her house with Selwyn is quite far from there though, and much closer to Dunstan's and Bertie's and Eadwyn's, so that's who they hang with now. Trudi is getting quite close to her confinement so she isn't going anywhere anyway.
Selwyn definitely has slept with other ladies besides his wife, as we will learn the next time I have scheduled us to see him.
Oh yeah he must have been
Submitted by Devin on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 18:04.Oh yeah he must have been the one who was in Suki's bed.. I don't like him, he has no self control.
Wh do I feel like that not so pretty sex scene might involve Aia..
If Selwyn's allowed to sleep
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 21:41.If Selwyn's allowed to sleep with whoever he wants, is Trudi also allowed, if only in her own mind?
On a completely unrelated note, what was Lar's relationship with Zevadra like?
Good question Van! What was
Submitted by Devin on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 21:55.Good question Van! What was Zevadra and Nidala like?
Oh yeah, Nidala! Thanks
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 22:14.Oh yeah, Nidala! Thanks Devin--I was wondering about her too
Trudi doesn't want to. I
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 05:43.Trudi doesn't want to. I don't know what to say beyond that without giving anything away...
And speaking of giving anything away, I reeeeally don't want to talk about Nidala and Zevadra. Those ladies are two of the keys to Lar, and that would spoil some of the mystery.
Next question?
Alred aside, do you think
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 17:59.Alred aside, do you think Matilda and Hetty would have gotten along if they'd known each other? And how about Egelric's wives?
Another good question Van.
Submitted by Devin on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 18:07.Another good question Van.
Thanks
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 18:19.Thanks
I can't imagine Hetty and
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 19:26.I can't imagine Hetty and Matilda as the best of friends. Matilda was so vibrant and Hetty is so pale and shy. Matilda might find Hetty to be a bit of a fuddy-duddy. Then again, Hetty does have a naughty streak to her, and if Matilda had figured out how to make the most of it, they might have had fun together. Overall though, Matilda seemed to get along much better with men than women anyway.
Would who get along with Egelric's wives? I bet Matilda and Lili could have gotten along if Matilda hadn't been jealous of her for being so young and cute and bubbly and flirty with everyone. (And for stealing Egelric's love, since Matilda always did seem to have a slight thing for Egelric.) Matilda at 40 might not have been thrilled with a 20-year-old Lili -- we saw she didn't handle aging very well. But if she had seen past that they could have had fun together. Lili would have been game for anything Matilda could dream up.
I meant how Egelric's wives
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 20:06.I meant how Egelric's wives would get along with each other. I imagine Sela and Lili might have some fun, maybe with Lili trying to learn Sela's language and trying to teach Sela English or German. Elfleda probably wouldn't have been too fond of either Sela or Lili, though. Correct me if I'm wrong, of course
Oh, and I remember Vash
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/15/2008 - 23:50.Oh, and I remember Vash telling Osh something about Ris and Madra being ordered to make a wife for him, even though they already have a daughter. This actually seems like a pretty big step for the khirron, breaking their one son, one daughter rule. Are they finally cluing in to the fact that they're essentially destroying their race with their rigid customs?
I have a hard time imagining
Submitted by Lothere on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 06:15.I have a hard time imagining Egelric's wives with each other outside of the context of Egelric. Obviously if he had tried to start a harem, I can't imagine any of those three ladies getting along with the others. ;-)
Elfleda might have gotten along with Sela. Sela might even have helped her understand a few things about herself, since Elfleda had a part of elf in her. They could have sat around and stared into fires together.
I could imagine Lili jumping gung-ho into a friendship with Sela but I am not sure Sela would have liked her all that much. Sela had a sense of humor, but she wasn't giddy. She might have found Lili annoying. You had to accept the cuteness and the silliness to get along with Lili, and to get access to the brilliant mind that was hiding behind them.
If you look at the elven family trees, you will see that the two-child policy has not been extraordinarily well-respected anyway. Look no farther than Shus's family -- he and Nush have two other siblings, namely Uncle Mustache's wife Ria and another brother who was killed by Hel back in the day.
My SQL-fu tells me that the average number of children born to khírrón ladies (as far back as my family tree goes) is 2.2344. The breakdown looks like this:
This must include a few families who were allowed to have another child to replace one lost young, but elven children don't have the habit of dying young.
If you look recent times though (say, ladies born since 1020), only two have been allowed to have more than 2 children -- Shus's mom and another who almost doesn't count, since her husband is only síkhón. So obviously Saralla takes this two-child rule very seriously. (She's been the Shalla since 1051.)
Saralla might justify it either as a necessary replacement for Vash's wife or a kindness paid to Ris and Madra since they lost their son. (Though in the latter case it would make more sense to let them have a son.)
But the more shocking innovation, if Vash's suspicions are correct, is that this girl would not be khórrón, and as far as history shows it would be the first time that the wife of the Khór has not been of his caste. Madra is khórrón but Ris isn't, and you can only get to that caste through your father. (Another guarantee of the eventual end of their caste system as they know it.)
If Matilda had a slight
Submitted by Van on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 16:35.If Matilda had a slight thing for Egelric, did Egelric have a slight thing for Matilda? It kind of seemed like it at the start of "Gwynn sees the meaning of handsome", when he first mistakes her for Alred, and then Matilda. Or did he just respect Matilda more than most women?
God, I hope these questions don't bother you too much
Don't worry these questions
Submitted by Lothere on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 17:42.Don't worry these questions are loads of fun for me.
I don't believe Egelric ever had a thing for Matilda. She was just way too far out in the stratosphere as far as his reach was concerned. I'm sure he found her attractive but I don't think he was actually attracted to her. He usually felt kind of sheepish and clumsy around her -- and she was his lord's wife -- and she was a great lady -- and he respected her the way he would have respected a man, which is so-so rare for Egelric.
Of course this was the Egelric of before-1080 too, who was not quite the swaggering, surly beast he has become in recent years.
When he was startled in "Gwynn sees the meaning" it was just because he thought for a minute that it was Matilda or Matilda's ghost. I guess Gwynn's voice as she ages is getting more like Matilda's too. Egelric has been dwelling so much on "dead ladies who are dead" lately, I suppose it's not surprising. In the same way Alred was thinking maybe Gwynn reminded of him so much of Matilda lately because he was thinking so much about Matilda ever since Lili died. (In "Gwynn sees a smile".)
Now the question is: is the Egelric of 1085 capable of being attracted to Gwynn? And what is he going to do about it if he is?
Ew.
Submitted by Tiffany on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 20:01.Ew.
Ew indeed! I'm afraid to say
Submitted by Devin on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 20:24.Ew indeed!
I'm afraid to say this but maybe in a year or two he should remarry just to prevent something like this from happening.
Not saying he would or
Submitted by Lothere on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 20:50.Not saying he would or anything. But on the other hand I can imagine a situation where Alred is being so unbearably passive-aggressively bossy with him that Egelric decides to passive-aggressively strike back or act out or whatever by doing something dirty with his daughter. For lo, if ever Egelric laid a hand on Gwynn, we may be certain that Alred would not only allow him to skip the parties and go back to his castle, he would probably also lock him up in the dungeon there and feed the key to a hog.
Why is the man so self
Submitted by Devin on Tue, 12/16/2008 - 20:58.Why is the man so self destructive and volatile!?
Why did Sigefrith make Alred
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 00:40.Why did Sigefrith make Alred the duke and Cenwulf the earl if he knew Cenwulf better than Alred at the time?
Also, looking back on that chapter where Sigefrith tries to get Caedwulf engaged to Gwynn, I can't help but wonder what Caedwulf thinks of Gwynn. I'm guessing he finds her kind of annoying, but at the same time can't help noticing how pretty she is and thinking how he might like to try to get in her pants in a few years?
I think I did mention this
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 07:22.I think I did mention this in a chapter once or twice, but I sure can't remember where. Sigefrith gave Alred a higher rank than Cenwulf for two reasons: Alred was richer then both of them put together, and he was married to King Harold's cousin.
Unlike Sigefrith's or Leofric's or even Cenwulf's, Alred's family was not noble -- which he believes Leofric holds against him, witness:
-- but they were filthy rich from some never-yet-mentioned exploits of his ancestors. And unlike Sigefrith and Cenwulf, who never made it back to Hwaelnaess at all after the battle, Alred scampered home and carried off everything he could, which is why he ended up with a large part of his fortune in the form of jewelry, and why Matilda was always so well-adorned.
In the early days I don't think anyone besides Matilda took the title thing very seriously anyway, which might have been a reason too. It kept Matilda happy. If you go all the way back to the first chapters you can see that Alred was all "Whatever you want, dear" about the the whole thing.
And if her young cousins or the Aetheling ever managed to take back the throne -- which in the early days Sigefrith believed was going to happen any month now -- they were going to need a happy Matilda to jockey them into the best possible place in the new king's court. Matilda knew all the big players in those days -- the men like Earl Morcar -- better than Sigefrith or any of the men, and she was a real favorite with them.
As for Caedwulf and Gwynn... you know, I tried, but I don't think I have a single chapter in which Caedwulf thinks anything about Gwynn. The closest I could find was this third-party exchange between Conrad and Cedric in "Gwynn kisses a beardless gentleman":
Perhaps by the time she was old enough for him to ogle, he was already engaged to Ogive, or at least he already knew that Alred wasn't going to make her marry him, which meant it was quite likely that she would never want to marry him at all.
He probably does find her rather tiresome -- Caedwulf has no time to waste on giggling and ROMANCE. Sigefrith is a sucker for a pretty face and likes his girls somewhat empty-headed and docile, but Caedwulf only likes them that way when it comes to the bedroom. He doesn't realize it yet, since except for his fling with Cecily he has never been in love, but Caedwulf actually wouldn't like a girl like Eadie all that much. He would probably like Gwynn better than Eadie. Gwynn is so naive she makes my teeth ache, but she's quite clever if she takes her time and thinks things through. (Though I doubt she'll be anything like "docile" in the bedroom.) But even then he would much prefer a girl with the brains of Ogive.
(Unfortunately, Ogive also has the body and face of Ogive, so that's going to be tough all around.)
It may be that my lack of Gwynn observations from the part of Caedwulf may simply be due to the fact that he doesn't think about her that way. Maybe growing up thinking he had to marry her spoiled her for him, but I think it more likely that their sorta-betrothed status over the years made their parents throw them together all the time at parties and so forth, so he grew up seeing her as a sort of annoying little sister. Maybe that will change as she grows up and especially outward, but right now I just don't detect any attraction there at all.
So a lot of the men in
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 19:31.So a lot of the men in Lothere do cheat on their wives occasionally, but it seems the major affairs all seem to be centered around married women (Maud, Matilda, Estrid), and the only one of those who had an affair with a married man was Matilda, and... well, let's face it, it's Leofric
So my question is, do any of the women have just casual extramarital affairs that, if mentioned in the story, probably wouldn't be very important? And do you foresee any major love affair between a married man and an unmarried woman in the future?
Also, have Lar and Ris met?
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 19:51.Also, have Lar and Ris met? I'm assuming Larl knows that Ris is his half brother.
I suppose the reason that
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 19:58.I suppose the reason that the big affairs tend to center around the women is that it's so OK for men to do it that it's practically non-story-worthy. Leofric cheats all the time.
In fact I'm probably somewhat unrealistic in that most of my men don't -- though in most cases I think it fits their characters that they don't. Sigefrith obviously has the whole "If I can't keep that promise how can I expect anyone to trust any other promise I make?" thing going on. Alred... well, there was Matilda, and there always will be Matilda, so I think he's safe. (Unless he acts on those possibly real, possibly we're-all-imagining-things creepy feelings he gets around Connie. Especially if she gets into the habit of clasping his thigh.)
And Egelric is a dawg when he's not married, but he has that pesky private code of honor of his keeping him faithful when he is.
Young Sigefrith is obviously capable of cheating, but he's such a Family Man I am not sure he will do it again. And the younger guys? With the possible exception of Dunstan I wouldn't categorically rule it out for any of them -- at least casual sex while abroad or something.
Whereas WOMEN. *coughs and straightens glasses* There are no casual extramarital affairs for women in the 11th century. A cheating man has to do penance, OK, but a cheating woman can be cast out into the cold cold night, after a suitably brutal beating of course.
Estrid's thing with K may look casual so far (I don't think there's love on either side, at least not yet) but it's deadly serious. If and when Brede finds out...
Sophie's the only one that occurs to me... she might have cheated on Leofwine, and it was sort of obvious enough that it didn't even get mentioned. We know she wasn't a virgin when she met him anyway. I really doubt Sophie is going to cheat on Stein though, at least not right away. She probably feels she has too much to lose, not to mention a real yearning for ol' Silver White himself.
Love affairs between married men and unmarried women... *ruffles pages*
Well, wait, Lena and Aengus count! Otherwise...
Magog is sorta married in his own mind, but by now, if anything, he is mostly using it as an excuse not to go back to Rua. (Did you notice his ring was gone in the last chapter? WTF? After I tried and tried to get it off him... now I don't remember what I did. I can say he took it off to make himself look poor, but I need it back, dammit!)
What about Malcolm the younger? What if his problems with Iylaine get so bad he has an affair? He's getting the counsel of Cearball at the moment, remember.
*Ponders...* What about Sigefrith himself? What if his problems with Eadie get so bad he has an affair in spite of his respect for vows? With a teenager?
What if Stein does? Ooooooh! Major heartbreak for Sophie.
Are you sure about this, Van? This looks like a lot of misery to me!
I was just wondering. I'd be
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:10.I was just wondering. I'd be pretty angry if any of the guys cheated on their wives. Except maybe Malcolm the younger, I think he's earned the right to have an affair. Oh, and I'd be okay if Bertie did, just because I highly doubt I'll ever like Anna.
Does Sigefrith ever make Emma hang out with Baldwin? If so, what do they do?
Ooh Ris and Lar! Well,
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:14.Ooh Ris and Lar! Well, either they haven't met yet, since there would be much Slaying and Slaughtering if that ever happened, or they have and it's such a mysterious meeting that I can't tell you about it yet.
Lar does know that Ris is his half-brother though. He seems to know quite a bit about Ris and Dru. You can look at "Lar imparts a secret" where he met Ris's son Lor and asked him to greet his grandfather (i.e. Lar's father Dru) for him. And more importantly, this bit from "Imin obtains a last next time" from a few days after:
Ooooh...
Gah! Our comments keep
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:24.Gah! Our comments keep crossing.
Haha one point for Team Malcolm-minus-Iylaine! Another team to add after Team Vash-minus-Iylaine (plus-or-minus-Kraaia).
Bertie might but I don't think he would do it until he had been made sufficiently disillusioned about Anna (doubtlessly by Anna herself). It could happen. Bertie was certainly no angel before he was married.
I don't think Sigefrith actually makes Emmie hang out with Baldwin, but their social gatherings being what they are, they end up in the same room quite often, and once there of course she is expected to at least get along with him. He's mostly invisible enough that he just sits in the background while Emmie and Meggie talk and play. They kinda like having him around because he's a boy and has certain privileges they don't, yet he does everything they tell him to do. Like I don't know sneak wine to them or something.
Sometimes she gets stuck dancing with him, though neither like that pastime very much. And otherwise they do the usual things the noble kids do. Riding and falconry and telling riddles and playing games. At this age they don't get stuck alone together the way Sigefrith (or Caedwulf mostly) was throwing Brit and Dunstan together all the time. That will surely come in a few years. They will probably marry fairly young since Cenwulf's only other heir besides Baldwin is Baldwin's little half-brother Ceolred. Also Emmie seems likely to be a bit wild, and Sigefrith may do like he did with Brit and hasten her marriage to force her to settle down.
“There isn’t another
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:31.“There isn’t another Lor! Don’t you get it? It takes a sick elf to go along with a scheme like that. Lure your cousin’s wife away to deliver her to a lot of rapists and murderers? If he was half as sick as his father and father’s father he probably couldn’t keep his hands out of his pants for thinking about it.’
“I like to hear you talking about sick,” Imin grumbled to hide his growing unease.
“I have better things to do with my hands, Imin. Like beating the shit out of lying, sneaking little hellrats like you. This is your warning, my friend. Next time there won’t be a ‘next time’.”
(From "Imin obtains a next last time")
Does Lar have any trace of whatever "sickness" Dru and Ris have, or run the risk of developing it?
I wouldn't be surprised if
Submitted by Devin on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:33.I wouldn't be surprised if Sigefrith cheated on Eadie with a teenaged maid..
OH CRAP Van you are so on to
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:35.OH CRAP Van you are so on to me!
I hope not! I still love
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:35.I hope not!
I still love Sigefrith/Eadgith. Although sometimes I wonder if that's just as wishful of me as thinking Egelric and Gunnilda still might be together one day (which, not going to lie, I still think that sometimes...)
REALLY?!?!?!?! Wow, this is
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:36.REALLY?!?!?!?!
Wow, this is so weird. I'm usually not the quickest to catch on to anything...
I was kind of hoping not though. Or at least that Larl will somehow rise above it!
Or Lar's son(s)! Ever since
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:45.Or Lar's son(s)!
Ever since I started thinking Sigefrith was a pedo I have been finding ookiness in lots of old chapters. Maybe he will lose interest in Eadie as she gets older and more womanly? Maybe he's actually falling for Ogive? He seems to hang out with her an awful lot for any man in his position, and especially for a woman-disdainer like Sigefrith. Reminds me of his little chats with a certain someone, back in the day.
OH MY GOD, GILS HAS IT
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 20:48.OH MY GOD, GILS HAS IT TOO.
I hope that's not the case with Sigefrith. Eadie doesn't deserve that
If Sigefrith dies soon, Eadie will marry again, right? Although who? My only backup for her is married, and I don't want his wife to die...
OMG you have a backup for
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:03.OMG you have a backup for Eadie? Do tell! Is it one of her dashing cousins? Hey, actually Britmar isn't even married...
Would Eadie marry again? I never even thought about that. She would be the mother of the 2nd in line to the throne... I am not sure Caedwulf and His Advisors (so funny to say that, since it would consist of, like, Malcolm and Dunstan and Selwyn) would allow her to marry again, at least until Caedwulf has an heir of his own. Anyone she married would have potential to influence her, and Drage through her.
Eadie would be asking herself what a great lady would do anyway, and she might decide a great lady mourns for the rest of her life.
Yes, yes, I do have a backup
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:09.Yes, yes, I do have a backup for Eadie, but like I said, he's married, and I don't want his wife to die any time soon (although I get the sinking feeling that she might, unfortunately). My backup for Eadie is Alred, actually, and has been since I reread that chapter where she was talking to him about Sigefrith and he thought she meant Brede, but like I said, don't kill Hetty! Although I actually have two potential backups for Alred...
And to think, I still don't have a single potential love for Larl! Even though I don't think he really needs one just yet. He seems to get enough action, and I can't see him committing to an actual relationship until he's accomplished a little more with his freedom fighting.
Eadie and Alred? Only
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:17.Eadie and Alred? Only shock-smilies can express my shock.
That was a cute chapter though, but I came away with the impression that Alred was looking on her in a very fatherly way.
Oh dear you think Hetty might die? Only cry-smilies, etc...
Who are your backups for Alred, huh? Tell us, huh huh? There are so few women in the valley, you would almost have to kill someone. The only two I can find (without robbing any cradles) are Irene and Edris, both interesting choices indeed.
But something tells me that if Hetty were to die, Alred would be done with romance of all kinds. He just couldn't do it any more. He's having a hard time doing it now, and I mean that in every sense of the expression.
I'm with you on Larl. That man (elf) is such an island. I kinda know where his character is going in the next few months or year, so I'm OK with that at the moment.
I don't think Alred would
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:21.I don't think Alred would marry for the romance of it again, just to have a mother around for his children. David's so young, and the new baby will definitely need some sort of mother, and even Gwynn and Meggie and the Old Man would benefit for having someone around, and Eadie is an excellent mother (only if the new baby is a girl, then he may need to find someone else to give her The Talk).
My other backup for Alred is... Sir Leila! But again, she's married, and again, I hope her husband lives. I just always got the impression that those two had some chemistry...
OH YES! I remember I once
Submitted by Lothere on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:33.OH YES! I remember I once toyed with the idea of Alred and Leila having an affair. They have all kinds of chemistry, since the day they met. And remember in "Alred returns Leila's chickens" they both seemed kind of disillusioned about the whole second marriage thing -- and, what's more, trusted each other enough to admit it to each other.
I like Godefroy well enough, but he's not a MAIN character, so as long as I can keep ConRAD! I would consider offing him. But I wouldn't kill Hetty just for that. On the other hand... Alred cheating on Hetty, while Hetty never truly cheated on him... that could have interesting repercussions too.
Man, Alred marrying a third time... I don't know, I can imagine him trying to find ANY other way to avoid doing that. If he had an old maid sister or someone to help him raise his kids... Or make Dunstan and Brit come live with him, and have Brit be the mother figure.
Alred marrying just to have someone to raise his kids... that would be so tragic. That would be like the death certificate of the Alred we once knew.
I always rather liked the
Submitted by Cassie on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:41.I always rather liked the idea of Alred and Sir Leila together. They have a lot of chemistry. And they have quite a lovely friendship...so did he and Gunnilda at one point, actually. And they used to joke-flirt all the time, and he went to her for advice about Matilda... Wouldn't that be amazing? Alred ending up with GUNNILDA of all people? Boy would that be weird.
It would be pretty awful if he got married just to have someone raising his kids... Poor lonely Alred. I think little old man Alred and old-lady Gunnilda together would be rather funny and cute, though. They're definitely better off as friends (clearly!) but I think that would be kind of cute.
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Alred and Gunnie would be
Submitted by Van on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:45.Alred and Gunnie would be cute together. But like I said a little earlier, I still have that slightly disillusioned dream of Gunnilda with Egelric.
So do I. *Sigh* I still
Submitted by Cassie on Sun, 12/21/2008 - 21:48.So do I. *Sigh* I still hope that they can be together...someday...maybe.
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So Leofric and Sir Leila's
Submitted by Van on Mon, 12/22/2008 - 01:26.So Leofric and Sir Leila's kids seem fairly clever, and I'm guessing Leia will grow up to be quite bright, but both young Sigefrith and Eadie are a little on the slow side, even though their parents are both decently intelligent. We haven't seen much of Leofric and Eadgith's younger children. Are they going to grow up to be smarter than their older full siblings, or is it something about Leofric's genes in conjunction with Eadgith's? I suppose they are cousins, so maybe it has something to do with the inbreeding...
Also, this has nothing to do with the story itself, really, but I'm curious. What are some of your Sims' aspirations? I remember reading somewhere that Leofric was romance (and, well, that was always kind of a given). I can see Sigefrith as either fortune or popularity, since he's really more into his politics than his family. Alred, a little harder; family or popularity or knowledge. What about Gwynn (and I'm guessing Matilda had the same)? I can see her as family or romance... do you have any of those expansion packs that allow for secondary aspirations? And of course I'm stumped on both Egelric and Larl. My guess is that Lar is knowledge or something for lack of anything more suitable. Egelric, probably the best bets are romance or fortune.
I always thought Alred and
Submitted by Lothere on Mon, 12/22/2008 - 06:03.I always thought Alred and Leila had more sexual chemistry than Alred and Gunnilda. There's not a romantic bone in Gunnie's body. I think Alred needs a little of that. It was cute that day he kissed her in the chapel, though, when she told him about Margaret's safe birth.
And I do think we could use some more Alred + Gunnilda interaction. They were really special. I wonder if he would go so far as to ask her about his feelings for Hetty?
As for the intelligence of the runts and grandrunts... the folk-scientific wisdom seems to say that people tend to inherit their mother's intelligence, so when lacking another force driving their character development, I tend to fall back on that. Lady Eadgith is not the brightest of women, though she has quite a bit of common sense. Leofric is the closet intellectual in that household -- I think he would rather be caught masturbating than caught reading, but he does both when he gets the chance. (I assume not at the same time.)
So I expect Mae and Hraef and Naedre to be more like young Sigefrith and Eadie in that regard. Hraef has already demonstrated his talents as a brawler rather than a diplomat. Naedre might be the only exception, if I choose to do something with the strangeness of his snake-eyes. He might be a special boy, but we probably won't know that for a decade or two.
It's Hilda's kids that I have my eye on. She seemed smart in a diabolical way. Wynflaed's kids will probably be nice and all, but Hilda's kids will be interesting.
And I don't expect Eadie's son Drage to be a shining beacon of discernment either, but that should already be becoming clear.
As for the aspirations... I noticed recently that Leof is actually Popularity. His sexiness is just innate. I created most of my early Sims as Family because I thought it had the most realistic wants for the medieval period. (Back when I was playing.) Since then I have not paid much attention to aspirations, really, since I don't play. I used to think Sims with certain aspirations had different animations (some of them, like the finger-pistol animation, they do) but I am not even sure about that. I thought Leof's sexy-walk and mouth-breathing was his Romance aspiration, but no, it's just Leof.
I don't think my game lets me have multiple aspirations. I don't have OFB (installed) or Bon Voyage or Apartment Life. I don't even know what I would do with them if I did. Aspirations and the attraction settings are pretty useless to me. The attraction thing just drives me batty with Sims always pink-hearting each other when I am trying to take pictures. Paul walks into a room and it's like a chain reaction meltdown of all the ladies.
I know you age your
Submitted by Van on Wed, 12/24/2008 - 00:59.I know you age your teenagers up to adults at seventeen, and your kids up to teenagers at ten or eleven, but when do you age your toddlers up to kids and your babies up to toddlers? I'm debating when I should age some of my sim babies up, but being one of two relatively close in age children of older parents with older friends with older kids, I really have no idea when exactly babies start looking older than newborns. I'm guessing you age yours up somewhere between six and nine months? As for kids, I'm going to guess around five, just because changing kid heights in Sim PE is pretty different from changing adult heights, and it's a bit of a stretch to have a four year old running around who's the same height as their nine-year-old sibling.
I tend to age my toddlers up
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 12/24/2008 - 05:58.I tend to age my toddlers up to children at around 5 years of age, or shortly before. Once they get to be kindergarteners, they look kind of silly toddling around like they can scarcely walk. And by that age, I really need them to be able to have more animations than sticking their finger up their nose and sitting on the floor and bawling.
But at that age, I consider them smaller than the Maxis default height of kids, so in SimPE I shrink them down. According to my own guesstimate of the height of default Sim kids next to default Sim adults, it looks like they have a height of 1.00 sometime between their 6th and 7th birthdays, on average.
For babies, I now age them up around 7-8 months. (Even though it's been an eternity in our time since I've had to do that!) Around that age they can sit up, and shortly thereafter they can crawl, and by 12 months some are taking their first steps. So by the time they're sitting up I am totally bored with the lying-around animations. And the bald heads.
But once again I shrink them down! On average baby boys don't get up to 1.00 height until they're 22 months old, and girls not till about 25 months.
Putting my height calculator up on the site is one of many things on my to-do list...
I think I'm using a
Submitted by Van on Wed, 12/24/2008 - 13:36.I think I'm using a different height scale than you are anyway, at least for adults and teens.
How's Gog these days? Is he going to make any appearances any time soon?
Hmm I don't think I have any
Submitted by Lothere on Wed, 12/24/2008 - 13:41.Hmm I don't think I have any Gog in the near future. He's getting up there y'know... not so eager to ride all the way to Lothere any longer, and especially not in the dead of winter.
Of course things could change depending on what Magog gets up to. If he goes home sometime soon we might even get to see Gog in his natural habitat.